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Because of study or relationship of friends, your mental and psychologically is so burdensome.

whenever my mental was broken or tired, I listen to the music

So I want to recommend listening to the music when you are tired or your mental health is weaken

The first benefit of listening to the music cures your wounded heart

Mentally tired physical and heart touch me through the song.

And, lyrics of the song consoles me and give hope and courage

so you will be likely to do everything possibly.

Secondly, it helps release your stress.

Although you are depressed, hoping melody and fast beat makes you excited.

The song seems to me to cheer yourself up. and relaxed your body.

And listening to the music helps has positive mine to you.

Finally, you can do indirect experience

You can feel the emotion that you have not been experienced.

Although you have not been experienced love, parting, and death, you can experience through listening to the music.

So you will become a more sensitive person

Therefore I would like to recommend listening to the music.

Bring your earphones if your mental is tired

Particularly your favorite singer’s song more improves your mental health.