나의 유머러스 해야만 하는 영어 자기소개 좀 봐줄래 ? 뭐 넣으면 좋을까

이게 데이팅 프로파일이라고 결혼 정보 사이트에 올리는거를 가상으로 하는거거든 ? 근데 이거 웃긴지 어쩐지 좀 봐조 ㅜ 헐 수 있으몀 문법 지적도 환영...... 그리고 뭘 더 넣거나 빼야할까 그리규 장문복 랩은 진짜 할거야 수행평가라서 먼가 오바해야할거같음 

Please look at the window ~ What a awesome weather! Do you know why today's weather is so good? Because I'll introduce myself to you ! yeahhh 

I want to tell you some of my advantages. 

First. I'm very responsible person. Because now I'm a chairman of my club and work alone as a general office demartment of our school, and last year, I was vice-president of my class. As you heard about this, I'm very responsible. So Whatever happens, I'll take care of you without betraying you. 

sencond, I'm very talented. I'm good at japanese Korean, speech, making new friends, business and whatever! It's not show off ~ It means I can take care of you , earn a living for you and so on in everywhere at anytime ! And there is a talent just for you .I'm very good at doing a rap! let me show you. (장문복 랩) plz text me~

[익인1]

ㅋㅋㅋㅋ솔직히 이건 미국식 유머는 아닌것 같지만.. Hi everyone,
Look outside, people~ What a awesome weather! Do you know why today's weather is so good? Because today, I'll be giving you my introduction!! yeah
My name is ____ and I want to have you know about me.
First of all, I'm very responsible. I'm currently a chairman of my club and work as a general office department of our school. And last year, I was in charge of vice-president of my class. As I said, I'm very responsible. So Whatever happens, I won't betray you, and I'll take care of you.
Also, I'm very talented. I'm fluent in not only languages like Japanese and Korean, but also giving people my speech, making new friends, running business and so on whatever you would expect me to! I'm not showing off myself~ which means I'm able to take care of you in everywhere at anytime ! My talents are just for you .
Oh, also I'm very good at rapping! let me show you something cool. (장문복 랩) plz text me if you're interested in me!

[익인2]

직역으로 한거라..문법들이라던지 약간 고쳤오~~

[글쓴이]

아 헐 대박 정성 쩐다 ㅡ.. ...... 사실 이게 애들을 웃겨야지 점수 잘받는 시험인데 아이디어는 생각안나고 ㅠㅠㅠ 그래서 좀 유치하더라도 철판깔고해야할거같아 ㅜ 진짜진짜 고마워!

[익인3]

Please look out the window~ nice weather isn't it? Do you guys have any idea why its so nice? Of course its because I am about to introduce myself to you guys!

So now, here is whats special about me

First, I am very responsible person. I am a chairman of my club and work as general office department of our school. Not just that, I was vice-president of my school last year. As you can see, I believe I am qualified to be considered responsible, and therefore, I am able to show you that I will take care of my work and my people without betraying.

Second, I am very talented, as you can see. I m good at Japanese, korean, giving speech, making new friends,taking care of business, and so much more.

오 쓰고 있더니 익이니 1이 다 해줬네! 그럼 난 익인이 1에게 고맙단말과 쓰니한테 굳럭! 을 남기고 가게써 총총~

[글쓴이]

ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 일케나 정성들여써주다니 진짜 고마웡 !!!!!!!!♡♡♡♡