혹시 영어권에 살다오거나 사는 익이니 있어?

내가 맞게 쓴건지 한번만 읽어주라ㅠㅠㅠ 몇문장밖에 안된다ㅠㅠ

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몬뎅?!

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어색하고 잘 안쓰는 표현이나 잘못된 부분 있을까?!

I have some difficulties understanding the grammer concepts on page 34. I want to be taught personally by you. I also want further education about the concepts.

I am available at 2 p.m. on Monday, Wednesday. May I visit your office at 2 p.m. Wednesday, Sept. 27? I would appreciate it if you let me know if that time is possible. If you are unable to discuss personal consultation at that time, please let us know the time available.

Thank you for reading my email.
I look forward to hearing from you.

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교수님한테 보내는겨?? 그러면 i want to be taught personally by you 보다는 i have some questions 라고 하는게 나을것같혀 그리구 그 다음 문장도 살짝 모르겟다ㅠㅠ

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번역기 돌려서 좀 이상할거야ㅠㅠㅠ 개인적으로 얼굴보고 묻고싶다고 말하고싶은데 어떻게 말해야할까!

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그럼 그냥 May I visit your office? 라고 해도 될것같아