내일 영어로 친구소개하거든?? 진짜 초딩같지...? 봐줄래 영어익들 ㅜㅠㅠ

She is suzy. She is 21years old. She has an older brother. She doesn't have a pet but she likes it. Her major is police administration. Her favorite food is 삼겹살. Her favorite singer is Zico. Her favorite movie is Comic. She likes to travel. Suzy wants to travel to Ienland. She wants to be a great police.  

 

8문장이상이거든???? 교양수업인데 ..좀 더 멋있게 어떻게 할까??????

[익인1]

두번째 문장에 동사없어ㅇ

[익인2]

22222 나도이거쓰녀햏음

[글쓴이]

어어! 깜박했다 땡큐!!!

[익인3]

This is 보단 she is가 낫지 않을까

[글쓴이]

고마워! 예시가 This is 라고 되어잇더라구ㅠㅠ

[익인4]

her favorite~ 을 반복하기 보다는 구체적으로 무엇을 좋아해서 뭘햇는지 이런걸 좀 더 써주면 훨씬 수준잇어 보일거 같아

[글쓴이]

그치..favorite 이 자구 반복되서 어떻게할지 고민이었어 ㅜㅜ

[익인5]

She doesn't have a pet, but she would love to have one.

[글쓴이]

헉 ㅜㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ고마우

[익인6]

저 문장들은 정해진거야? 내용을 바꿀 순 없지?

[글쓴이]

아니야 내용바꿀수있어!!! 친구소개하는거라서 친구소개하는내용만 있으면돼!

[글쓴이]

친구소개하는 영어문장은 처음이라서 예시된거 참고한거야 ㅜㅜ

[익인7]

너무 뚝뚝 끊기는 느낌이야! 차라리 전공과 꿈에 맞춰서 바꿔봤으면 하는데 잠시만!

[글쓴이]

그럴까...??! 응응!!

[익인9]

Let me introduce my friend suzy. She is 21, same as me. First of all, I will tell you about her tastes. Her favorite food is 삼겹살. She likes to watch comedy movies. Actually She doesn’t have a pet but she likes animal.
Oh well, Her major is police administration. She wants to be a great police. As I see her, She has a strong sense of justice. So I’m sure that her dream will come true.
That’s about it. Thank you for listening.

[글쓴이]

아 ....멋있어 ....... 나도 영어공부 해야겠다 진짜.....진짜 멋있어 고미워 정말 ㅜㅜㅜㅜ

[익인10]

글쓴이에게
익인도 21살 맞지? 내 맘대로 같다고 써놔부렸네

[글쓴이]

10에게
아니야 맞아맞아!!!! 고마워 참고할게 !!! 사랑해융 영어맛있당 ㅜ

[익인8]

This is Suzy. She is 21 years old, and we first met at ~~~(처음 만났을 때에 관한 짧은 설명.) There are lots of things she like. First of all, she loves pets. She always wants to breed some animals, but she doesn't have one. She also likes comic movies and 삼겹살. She likes to travel, and because of it, she always looks for places to go.
Her major is police administration, and she wants to become a good police.

[글쓴이]

헐... ㅜㅜㅜㅜ

[글쓴이]

멋있어.........