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For lots of soldiers returning home, plastic surgery was very helpful to piece their lives back both physically and mentally. It helped people who were wishing to go back to normal life. If plastic surgery didn’t exist at that time, lots of soldiers might have had hard time to regain sense of normalcy 

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Then, the use of plastic surgery started to develop for cosmetic purposes. Plastic surgery is influencing lots of people nowadays. According to the graph from ASAP, the number of people who does plastic surgery is increasing every year. To give you a better understanding of how plastic surgery effected one society, I have one country as an example.