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Dear XXX,o:p>/o:p>

Hello, I’m XXX and I’m a formerstudent of XXX about 16 years ago. I attended elementary school of XXX in2004~2005(G1~G2)(I guess.)o:p>/o:p>

I'm writing this e-mail to find out ifformer students of XXX are allowed to take a campus tour.o:p>/o:p>

I have checked the school’s website for anysmiliar notice, but I couldn’t find one.o:p>/o:p>

o:p> /o:p>

Soon, I will be graduating college and I wantedto celebrate it with a special trip; a trip to a place where my life as astudent started, which is XXXo:p>/o:p>

I’m planning to go to AAA on Aug, 2020or on Feb, 2021 for about 5~7 dayso:p>/o:p>

On my first day in AAA, I want to visitXXX and maybe take some photos. o:p>/o:p>

It would really mean a lot to me if it isallowed.o:p>/o:p>

o:p> /o:p>

Sadly, I don’t have any files or yearbookleft at home. So the only way to prove that I really went to XXX is to talkabout some memories and informations about the school back then. If the school stillhas the yearbook 2004, maybe you can find me in the G1 page. My 1sup>st/sup>grade teacher was XXX. I don’t remember the 2sup>nd/sup> grade teacherbecause I only finished the 1sup>st/sup> semester. There were 3 Koreans in myclass and one of the students’ name was XXX or something similar. Shewas my best friend at school back then. And my brother also attended XXX from G1to G3. His name is XXX. If you need more proof I will try to come up withmore memories that I have.o:p>/o:p>

o:p> /o:p>

I had such great time in XXX and thatmemory always reminded me of XXX until now.o:p>/o:p>

I still remember the day when I took a testto get into the school, my first day and last day in XXX.o:p>/o:p>

Again, I would be eternally grateful if this request is allowed. I know this is an odd favor to ask ,so I 100% understand if the school rejects myvisit.

o:p> /o:p>

I will wait for any replies. Thank you forreading this e-mail.o:p>/o:p>

Yours truly, o:p>/o:p>

XXXo:p>/o:p>

국가 이름, 학교 이름, 내 이름, 다른 사람 이름은 다 가렸다.

혹시 고쳐야 하는 표현이나 그래머 있니

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띄어쓰기는 복붙하면서 뭔가 이상해져서... 그냥 스루해줘!

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지나가다가 ,, o:p>가 뭐야..?

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그냥 다른 프로그램에서 복붙해와서 생긴 컴퓨터 코드인거같아

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문법은 몰라도 무슨말인지 다 이해 가니까 괜찮을것같아. 근데 문장중간에 100% 넣는것보다 completely 넣는게 나을것같은데

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글고 기억보단 실물 종이가 나을둣 옛날 비자나 오래된사진같은것도 없어? 그학교 지원할ㄸㅐ받은 서류 같은고 잘찾아보면 남어있을것같아ㅏ

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최소 여권도장같은거라듀

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사실 집에서 독립해서 ㅎㅎ... 연락안하고 삼....

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그리고 여권은 너무 오래전 여권이라 아마 버렸을걸