영어 잘 하는 사람...? 들어와줘 PLZ ㅠㅠ

문장 10개 넘는데 다 쉬운 문장이거든... 혹시 문법상 틀린 부분 없는지 가볍게 검토해줄 수 있는 익...?ㅠㅠㅠ

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[익인1]

보여줘

[글쓴이]

스크립트처럼 주고 받는 대화 형식인데 내가 직접 작문한 거라 틀린 부분 많을 수도 있어 잠시만 ㅠㅠ!!!

[글쓴이]

1.Can you tell me what your favorite TV show is? => My favorite TV show called “Inkigayo(인기가요)”.
2.What kind of show is it? => It’s a music video.
3.Do you know what the Inkigayo is about? => The Inkigayo is about the latest music by popular singers.
4.Is the show popular or not? => The show is many popular.
5.Can you explain why this show is popular? => The show is popular because it informs people of new music every week. Also, handsome and pretty face of MCs plays a part.
6.Then, why do you like this show? => Because one of the show's MCs is my favorite K-pop idol. He is very handsome.
7.Do you know what his name is? => His name is “@@@”
8.I wonder where you usually watch this program. => I usually watch this program at home.
9.Do you know if Inkigayo airs on the weekends? => Yes, inkigayo airs on the weekend.
10.Oh, Can you tell me what time the Inkigayo is on? => According to the TV schedule, the Inkigayo is on at 2:40 p.m.

[글쓴이]

특히 인기가요 같이 여러번 언급된 단어 앞에 the를 붙여야되는지 안 붙여도 되는지 넘 헷갈려서 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 간단하게라도 검토해줄 수 있을까...?ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

[삭제한 댓글]

(본인이 직접 삭제한 댓글입니다)

[글쓴이]

스크립트처럼 주고 받는 대화 형식인데 내가 직접 작문한 거라 틀린 부분 많을 수도 있어 잠시만 ㅠㅠ!!!

[글쓴이]

1.Can you tell me what your favorite TV show is? => My favorite TV show called “Inkigayo(인기가요)”.
2.What kind of show is it? => It’s a music video.
3.Do you know what the Inkigayo is about? => The Inkigayo is about the latest music by popular singers.
4.Is the show popular or not? => The show is many popular.
5.Can you explain why this show is popular? => The show is popular because it informs people of new music every week. Also, handsome and pretty face of MCs plays a part.
6.Then, why do you like this show? => Because one of the show's MCs is my favorite K-pop idol. He is very handsome.
7.Do you know what his name is? => His name is “@@@”
8.I wonder where you usually watch this program. => I usually watch this program at home.
9.Do you know if Inkigayo airs on the weekends? => Yes, inkigayo airs on the weekend.
10.Oh, Can you tell me what time the Inkigayo is on? => According to the TV schedule, the Inkigayo is on at 2:40 p.m.

[글쓴이]

특히 인기가요 같이 여러번 언급된 단어 앞에 the를 붙여야되는지 안 붙여도 되는지 넘 헷갈려서 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 간단하게라도 검토해줄 수 있을까...?ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ