외국어 이거 영어문장 만든 건데 맞나 봐줘ㅠㅠㅠ

July 5th was the day when i had mam's birthday party.

She looked happy becouse i gave a purse for her.

 

This house is the piace where my family and i live togethe.

We are happy becouse we live with a puppy.  

 

틀린 거 지적해주라!!

[익인1]

We had mom's birhthday party on july 5th. I gave her a purse and she looked happy.
This is the place where my family and i live together. We are happy because we have a puppy. 가 더 자연스러운 거 같은데 전체적으로 스펠링 체크 하고 적어~!
그리고 마지막에 강아지 부분은 좀 더 부연설명을 해야 자연스러울 거 같아 강아지가 있어 행복하다는 건 약간 뜬금 없으니까 앞에 "우리는 강아지를 키운다."그리고 저 문장이 들어가면 좋을 듯