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미국사는 유학생 여기있다ㅎㅁㅎ!

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헉...잠깐만 지금 복붙 해줄게...!!!!

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길지...ㅠㅠ? 부탁할게...ㅠㅠㅠ

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내가 생각하는 고쳐야 될 부분을 수정해서 주면 되는거야?

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응..!!!

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I will open a Tteokbokki restaurant on Seoul campus, and it will be called “Seoul Tteokbokki”. I would choose red, black and yellow colors for the business. The first color I chose is red, because it would make customers feel like the food is hot and spicy. The second color I chose is black. Since I would use the hottest chili in the world, the black color, representing hot foods, is also going to be used. After eating the Tteokbokki, customers will have heartburn. I want to open a hot Tteokbokki restaurant for people who likes spicy food a lot. Therefore, the red and black colors are appropriate to attract people. The third color I chose is yellow. It would make customers think that the food looks very appetizing, so I will use yellow light. For instance, many food restaurants are using the yellow light, because it makes the food in the restaurant look fresh and delicious. Also, the yellow color represents Cheese which is one of the main ingredients of the Tteokbokki. In conclusion, the three colors, black, red, and yellow, are suitable for a hot and spicy Tteokbokki restaurant.
일단 눈에 보이는 것들은 내가 쓰던 방식으로 고쳐봤는데 맘에 들까 모르겠네ㅠㅠ 그리고 after eating the Tteokbokki, customers will have heartburn. 이 문장이 문맥에 맞나 싶어서 긴가민가하는데 글자수 여유있으면 빼도 될것같은 문장이야! 빠듯하면 넣는게 좋을것같고. 중간중간에 오타들도 조금 고쳤고 문장도 바꿨는데 괜찮을까 싶다ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ무조건 내가 한게 맞은게 아니니까 혹시라도 궁금한 점있으면 질문해줘!

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정말 고마워....와 진짜 고마워...ㅠㅠㅠ 여기가 익명이라 내가 뭔가 선물해주고 싶은데 어려우니까 별거 아닌 답례지만 내가 좋아하는 노래 남기고 갈게 정말 고마워 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ문법 만날 점수 깎여서 스트레스 많이 받았었는데 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 정말고마워 익인아!!!!!

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고마워~