외국어 영어 작문한거 문법 좀 고쳐주세요ㅠㅠ

There are diverse buildings in the world. I’ll introduce structure which built with impressive purpose. First, Tajimahal what became known by many people is what I want to tell. The Taj Mahal is the tomb built by a king who loved queen consort. Second one is Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe (Holocaust-Mahnmal). Germany built this park because they want to sorry to jews. So they construct extensive park in Berlin near Brandenburg gate . In addition, they build another monument in same purpose.

대충이렇게 썼는데 문법이 다 틀린것같네요ㅠ

[익인1]

There are diverse buildings in the world.
I’ll introduce some structures which built with an impressive purpose.
First of all, I'd like to tell(introduce) Tajimahal (which) became known by many people.
The Taj Mahal is a kind of tomb built by a king who loved a queen consort.
Second one is the Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe (Holocaust-Mahnmal).
Germany built a memorial park because they want to apologized to jews.
So they constructed an extensive park in Berlin near the Brandenburg gate.
In addition, they built another monuments with the same purpose.

[글쓴이]

감사합니다!!

[글쓴이]

혹시 작문 도와주실 수 있으신가요??ㅠㅠㅠ

[익인2]

There are diverse buildings in the world. I'll introduce some structures, which were built with an impressive purpose. First of all, I'd like to introduce(아님 talk about도 여기선 괜찮아!) Taj Mahal, which became known by many people. The Taj Mahal is a tomb built by a king who loved a queen consort. The second one is the Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe. Germany built a memorial park, because they wanted to apologize to Jews. So, they constructed an extensive park in Berlin, near the Brandenburg gate. In addition, they built other monuments with the same purpose.

[글쓴이]

ㄱ감사합니다!! 죄송한데 작문좀 도와주시겠어요??ㅜㅠㅠㅠ

[익인3]

예예!

[글쓴이]

왕은 아내의 죽음을 애도하며 22년동안 무덤을 지었다고 한다.
건물의 대리석은 태양에 각도에 따라 빛깔이 달라진다.
입장료는 1000루피로,우리 돈으로 만 칠천원정도에 해당하는 돈이다.


월요일 영어수업 때 발표하는데 너무 막막하네요ㅠㅠ
도와주셔서 감사합니다ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

[익인4]

The king, mourning his queen consort, built the tomb for 22 years. The marble encasing the building changes colors, depending on the angle of the sunlight it is met with. The entry fee is 1000 rupees, which roughly converts to 7000won by our currencies.

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4에게
원래 댓은 아닌데 한번 써봤네요..ㅠㅠ