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There are diverse buildings in the world.

I will introduce some structures, which were built with an impressive purpose.

First of all, I'd like to introduce Taj mahal which became known by many people.

It is a kind of tomb built by a king who loved his wife.

He built tomb to mourn for queen consort for 22 years.

Beautifully, Marbles of building vary in compliance with angle of sun.

Entrance fee is 1000 rupee, It is 17000 Won in Korean money.

Second one is the Memorial to the Murdered Jews of Europe.

Germany built a Holocaust-Mahnmal because they want to apologize to jews.

So they constructed an extensive park in Berlin, near the Brandenburg gate.

USA built another monument with the same purpose.

Last, Gyeongbokgung in Korean was built in 1395.

‘Gyeongbokgung’ means ‘Enjoy the great goodness’.

Gyeongbokgung has some historical value because it suffers destruction caused by war, destruction by the Japan after restoration.

And It also has artistic merit.

Because it is one of only a small number of Korean traditional house.

It also can read off Hanok's amazing technology because of larger size of it.

I want to go to Gyeongbokgung after College Scholastic Aptitude Test.

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