영어 문법좀 봐줘ㅠㅠㅠ짧아ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

When I was 14 years old, I traveled Busan during the summer vacation. I saw Haeundae and I enjoyed dabbling in a water and chatted with my cousin. I felt comfortable and glorious because I met my cousin after a long interval. I was impressed with the scenery of the night of ocean. I was very impressed by these things because I has lived the place where I can see any ocean. Therefore, it was very impressing to me because of this reason. 

[익인1]

밑에서 세번째줄 I has lived☞have live

[익인2]

has lived가 아니고 had lived 아냐? 그리고 뒤에 the place 생략해도 될 것 같아 그리고 impressing이 아니라 impressed

[익인3]

졸려서 세세하겐 못 살펴봤다.. 내가 틀릴 수도 있엉