외국어 영알못 쓰니 도와주라ㅠㅜ

My favorite artist is ooo. 

It's because first, he is good at singing. 

Second, he is good at dancing as well. 

Third, he composes good songs. 

Lastly, he is handsome and very caring. 

For these reasons, I like him. 

 

 

이거 괜찮아? 이상한부분있어?ㅠㅜㅠ

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There are some reasons that he makes me to like him.
First, he is good at singing and dancing.
And, he also composed good songs.
Furthermore, he is handsome and very kind.
So I'm destined to love him.
이렇게 쓰면 더 좋을 거 가타.