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I was impressed with the curling competition during the Pyeongchang Winter Olympics, but I felt it would be difficult to play it. So I want to learn curling among various sports. 

 

I learned Japanese during the year when I was a high school student, but I felt sorry because I could not learn many things. 

If I have a chance, I would like to learn more and develop my skills as a native. 

 

I want to learn swimming. This is because it not only helps a lot in real life but is also good for my health. 

 

I want to play the piano. I went to piano academy for quite a long time when I was young. The memory of the time was still good, so I thought I would like to study more professional piano. 

 

I want to go on a trip to Europe. Under my circumstances, I don't have much time and money now, but before I turn 30, I would like to experience many things and have good memories in Europe.