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Touch football is a variation of rugby league and union. It started in Australia in 1963 as a social 'park' game and as a training technique for rugby league. The game was popularised in the late 1960s and early 70s and was first recognised as a formal sport in its own right in 1968.  The game garnered a considerable amount of interest from many people including ex-footballers and players not willing or unable to play regular rugby. It also caused an increased awareness in fitness in the adult population. The game has expanded rapidly in recent years especially in Asia, South Pacific, Europe and UK, and Touch World Cups now attract over 50 nations.

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Touch football is a variation of rugby.
이거만으로도 충분해 뒤에 리그에서 유니언까지 다 잘라도 됨

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Park에 ' 이거 다 없어도 됨 지워버려

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And as a training technique for rugby league 이게 뭔 말인지 잘 모르겠어 뭘 설명하려는 건지... 더 구체적으로 말하거나 아예 빼버려

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and was first recognised as a formal sports in 1968 이렇게만 해도 돼

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오오 고마워..!

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글쓴이에게
뒷부분은 깔끔하네 잘 썼다

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아니 근데 'park'가
park라고 불리는데 실제로 공원에서 하는게 아니라서 붙어있는건데?

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나야 럭비를 모르니까... ;ㅅ;
근데 '' 사이에 두는 것보다는 아예 제대로 park에 대해 설명하는 게 나을 것 같아

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아하...! 그래그래 고맙다 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ