영어 어색한 부분 좀 알려줄 익ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 부탁해ㅠㅠ 성적이의..!!

Thank you for taking the valuable classes during the semester. 

Thanks to you, it has become a class for many things. 

I am writing to ask you about my grades this semester. 

If you don't mind, would you please let me know the detail score for middle, final, and quiz? 

Please reply. 

The weather is getting hotter, I hope you stay healthy.