영어잘하는익들 ㅜㅜ 존경하는인물 영어로 10문장했는데 고칠거있어?

My hero is my father. 

I admire his a lot. 

He is very patience and faithful. 

He gave up college for his younger brother and began to work. 

He got a lot of jobs because he saved his skils. 

However, due to nmany failures,it was economically difficult. 

Morever, when my mom was sick at the hospital because she was sick, he was really hard. 

So he went out and worked in the middle of morning to work out the work and nurse my mom. 

He has repeated such a difficult task for almost a few years. 

But when i was young, i always showed my dad a smile. 

At last he has succeded in business and now leads the company. 

Because he was there, my family seems to be happy now. 

I love him. 

 

ㅜㅜㅜㅜㅜ 문맥 뭐가 안맞는ㄱ 많지??? 영어잘못해

[익인1]

I admire him* a lot.

He is very patient* ~

He had a lot of jobs because he had many skills. (save가 어떤 의미로 쓰였는 지 모르겠어ㅠㅠ 미안)

However, due to many* failures, he/my family had financial difficulties.

Moreover*, when my mom was admitted to the hospital (because she was sick 이건 안 써도 돼), he had a very hard time*.

So he went out and worked in the middle of morning to work out the work and nurse my mom.
(이 문장 한국어로 다시 알려주라.)

Again, he had* had* such a difficult time for a few years.
(근데 현재완료보단 그냥 과거형이 더 보기 좋을 거같아.)
Again, he went through for a few years. (다시, 몇 년간 힘든 생활?을 견뎠다.)

But when i was young, i always showed my dad a smile.
(너가 아버지한테 웃어줬다는 거지?)

Eventually*, he has succeded in business and now he* leads the company. (he 써주는 게 보기 좋아(?))

Because he had been there (음 there이나 동사를 고치고 싶은데 어떻게 해야할지 모르겠어ㅠㅠ), my family seems (to be 안 써도 돼) happy now.

[글쓴이]

으아아아앙 ㅜㅠㅜㅜㅠㅠ너무고마워 ㅜㅜㅜㅠ 지금읽어볼게 다시

[익인2]

잠깐만 아직 수정 중이야. 모르고 고치는 중에 댓글 올라가부럿쓰

[글쓴이]

아아 긇구만 !!!! 고마워

[익인3]

수정 완료! 근데 문장들이 조금 매끄럽지가 않아. 대충 고치긴 했는데 완벽하지 못해ㅠㅠㅠ감안해주라

[글쓴이]

3에게
So he went out and worked in the middle of morning to work out the work and nurse my mom.
이 문장! ㅜㅜ 맞아 어려웠어
“그는 아침일찍 일을 나가고 시간을 쪼개서 우리엄마간병을 하였다.” 대충이런 문장이야!!

[글쓴이]

글쓴이에게
But when i was young, i always showed my dad a smile.
내가 웃어줬다는게 아니고 “그럼에도 불구하고 아빠는 항상 웃어줬다”이런 문장이야 !!ㅎㅎ

[익인4]

글쓴이에게
Even though he had to go to work in the very early morning, he looked after my mom as much as he can.

When I was young/younger, he always showed me a smile although he had another tough time for a few years.
(원래 있었던 again, he had had such a difficult time for a few years.랑 한 문장으로 붙여썼어!)

[글쓴이]

4에게
하..으아아앙 너무고마워 ㅜㅜㅜ 진짜 다시 고쳐서 참고할게!! ㅎㅎㅎ

[익인5]

글쓴이에게
응응! 쓰니 아버님 진짜 멋있다!

[글쓴이]

5에게
고마워ㅜㅜㅜㅎㅎㅎㅎㅎ