혹시 영어잘하는사람있어..?

On the second day, I went to Namsan mountain, tomb of Queen Seondeok and Cheomseongdae.  

First, I will tell you about Namsan mountaion.  

There are many stone Buddhas.  

It was hard to climb up, but after seeing the statues, I thought it was worthwhile. 

Next, I will tell you about tomb of Queen Seondeok.  

Queen Seondeok is the queen of Silla. 

I watched drama Queen Seondeok when I was young, so this place came to me more special.  

The queen had maden Cheomseongdae and we visited there. 

Cheomseongdae is astronomical observatory. 

Cheomseongdae is a scientific structure that represents the kingdom and boasts its own value with its beautiful appearance. 

It was a bit inconvenient because of the rain, but I thought taking pictures with my team members and talking about it became a good experience. 

 

이거 문법 문제있는지좀봐주라ㅠ

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First, 그 문장 마지막 mountain 이 taion 이라고 오타났어!!문법도 알려주고싶은데 내가 잘 몰라서 ㅠㅠ흑흑 화잇또 익이나,,,,,,내가 보기엔 괜찮은거같아

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할 고마위!!

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make는 과거형도 pp도 made!

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고마워!!다른건 문제없어??

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drama 앞에 the, 천문대 앞에 an이라는 관사 붙어야 할 것 같앙 🤔

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너무고마워ㅠㅠㅠ

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그리구 과학적 구조 언급하는 부분에서 is 보다는 has가 더 잘 어울릴 것 같아 !!!

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4에게
앗 아직 봐주고 있었구나 신경써줘서 너무고마워ㅜㅠㅠ 발표잘하고올겡:")익이니 좋은하루보내!

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글쓴이에게
히히 아녀 쓰니 화이팅 해 !!!!!!!

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첫번째 문장에 남산 뒤에 to 빼는게 더 자연스러울거같아