내영어 작문한걸 제발 도와줘쉬운거야 구원해줘젭알/ㅞㅠㅠㅠ

Now i will introduce our highschool 

The school was founded in1964 

the flower of school is a cottom flower and tree is juniper 

Our principal's name is ooo  

She alway treat's us warmly. 

Our school have intellisen students and kind teachers 

All the school teachers ad students live in harmony with one another like a family 

But our school don't have a schoolmarket and the school building is too old. 

Our school have many flowers and trees  

Its so beautiful 

Last the uniform of the school is the most beautiful!

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Now i will introduce my highschool.

The school was founded in 1964.

The school flower is the cottom flower and the school tree is the juniper.

My principal's name is ooo

She always treats us warmly.

Our school have intellisen(???이게 뭔지 모르겠어) students and kind teachers.

All the school teachers and students live in harmony with one another like a family. (문법적으로는 맞는데 뭔가 어감이.. 이웃끼리 조화롭게 산다는 것 같아ㅋㅋㅋ)

But our school doesn't have a schoolmarket and the school building is too old.

Our school has many flowers and trees.

They're so beautiful.

Last the uniform of the school is the most beautiful!

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헐 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ너천사지.ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

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intelligent 야ㅠㅠㅠ잘못적었어 그럼 our school has 로 다바꾸면 될까ㅠㅠ???

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아 잠깐 마지막 문장 못봄...Lastly, the school uniform is beautiful.로 고치는게 좋을것같아. 지역에서 제일 예쁜건지, 학교 관련 된 거에서 제일 예쁜건지 모르겠어서...

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지역에서!

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너혹시 외국사니ㅠㅠㅠ??????사랑해

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글쓴이에게
아니 외국안살앜ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ 그럼 더 궁금한거 있음 나중에라도 물어봐!!

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4에게
All the school teachers and students live in harmony with one another like a family. (문법적으로는 맞는데 뭔가 어감이.. 이웃끼리 조화롭게 산다는 것 같아ㅋㅋㅋ)이문장 자연스럽게 바꿀수없을까ㅠㅠㅠ???? 많아 모르는거ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ

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글쓴이에게
All the school teachers and students treat each other like a family. 로만 바꿔도 괜찮을 것 같아!

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5에게
마지막으뢰물을게ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠour school 이면 has 써야되지않아ㅠㅠㅠ????doesnt has 무조건이야???

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글쓴이에게
응응!!! 중간에 하나 빼먹었네!

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6에게
저기언니인지 오빠인지 동생인지 몰라도사랑해도될까요...? 흐브흐므5ㅡ브 감사합니다 은인이에요ㅠㅠ 영어전공하시나요??ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ사랑해요

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글쓴이에게
쓰니가 몇살인지 몰라서 말해줄수가 없지만...전 17입니다! 외국에서 살지는 않고 살았었어요!! 은인까지얔ㅋㅋㅋㅋ

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7에게
저보다 나이가어리시네요ㅠㅠㅠㅠ그래도은인입니다 감사헣엏엉어어이엉사랑해동생아

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그럼 Lastly, my school uniform is the prettiest out of all the other ones in town. beautiful 쓰니까 아름답다는 느낌이 강해서.. 좀 더 가볍게 pretty 하다고 바꾸는게 어땡?

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3에게
맞는문장이면 돠괜찮아ㅋㅋㅋㅋ