나 영어 스피킹 시험 대본인데 틀린거 없나 확인좀 해주라..

How are you? This is my earphones. It's very special to me. My parents bought it for me when I was 14 years old. It was my birthday present. I listen to music after school. I usually listen to music in my room. I like listen to music because it helps me focus on school work.

이거 토대로 한거야! 확인좀 ㅠㅠ

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응 고마워!!