인스티즈앱
영어 쓰기 수행평가가 있어서 써 봤는데, 혹시 어색하거나 더 쉽게 쓸 수 있는 표현 같은 게 있으면 고쳐주실 수 있을까요? 부탁드립니다 ㅠㅠ 아무한테도 물어볼 수가 없어서요... My healthy habits I have many habits. Today, I'm going to talk about the healthy habits. My good healthy habit is drinking lots of water. It has a good effect on my body. Water helps the toxins out of the body. So drinking a lots of water can prevent skin probelm and aging. If my classmates drinking lots of water, they can have clean skin. My bad habit is eating junk food often. It makes my teeth decay and gain weight. If I continue to eat junk food, My healthy deteriorate. To break this habit, I have to eat regularly every day. I should break bad habits and become healthier.