영어 잘하는 익인!! 작문 틀린 거 있는지 봐주라

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[익인1]

너 글 위위위쪽에 미국에 살다왓다고 질문잇냐고 물어보는 익잇다ㅋㅋ 거기에 물어봐바

[익인2]

ㅠㅠㄱㄷㄱㄷ 나 고치고 있었는데 댓 삭제했더라? 지나가던 익인이야

[글쓴이]

헐 미안 ㅠㅠㅠㅠ 답이없길래ㅠㅠㅠㅠ 여기 다시 달께!!

[글쓴이]

Last weekend, I went to the Jamsil stadium to see the competition of the Dusan's Bears.
Actually i didn't know well about the Dusan but following with my friends to watch the baseball game, i became one of the big fan.
Nowaday, most of the people come late to the stadium, but for me I want to see how players prepare their training, so i reached at stadium one hours ago.
As usual we arrived an hour early, with chicken and beer and entered.
I was called 'the goddess of the victory' since the team that I go to cheer has always win.
So i was expecting to see this competiton.
As expected, Dusan won 8:2 as making the seventh of winning.
After that we went to the Hangang joyfully.
Since most of my friends went university to far places, and we hadn't see each other for many time, It was so greatful time and spend a day sharing a lot of stories.

[익인4]

밑에 있어 ㅠ.ㅠ 미안 빨리 보느냐고 대충 고치긴했어!

[글쓴이]

진짜고마워ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

[익인3]

Last weekend, I went to Jamsil stadium to see the competition of Dusan's Bears.
Actually I didn't know well about the team of Dusan but followed my friends to watch the game, i became one of the big fan.
At that time, most of the people came late a bit to the stadium, but for me I wanted to see how players prepare their training, so i reached at the stadium before an hour. Therefore, we entered to the stadium an hour early, with chicken and beer.
I called 'the goddess of the victory' since the team that I go to cheer has always win.
So i was expeced to see this competiton.
As I thought, Dusan won 8:2 as making the seventh of winning.
After that we went to Hangang joyfully.
Since most of my friends had entered to universities to far places, and we couldn't see each other for many time, It was so grateful time and spent a day sharing a lot of stories.