영어 잘하는 사람?????

내가 쓴 영작 좀 봐줄 수 있니?????????

[익인1]

웅 봐봐

[글쓴이]

When we often found the information or don't know about something, we used to search on the internet. Before internet was invented, we had to go to the library or read the book such as textbook, encyclopedia. Because of internet we don't need to them. People used to share what they experienced so that many people can see it on the internet and can get a lot of things. These days, we can use the internet everywhere. However, we used to get misinformation. It would confused thoughts of us, so we need to distinguish between useful information and wrong information.

used to 가 많은 거는 지금 배우는 문법이 used to 여서 그래 !ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

[익인2]

When we often found the information or don't->(didn't ) know about something, we used to search on the internet. Before internet-> (it) was invented, we had to go to the->( a ) library or read the -> (a)book such as textbook(s), (and) encyclopedia. Because of internet (because of 보다는 Thanks to, owing to 가 더 자연스럽다! because of는 약간 뭐뭐 때문에 이런 뉘앙스고 위 두개는 뭐뭐 덕분에! ) we don't need to them-> these (anymore?). People used to share what they (have) experienced so that many people can see it on the internet and can get-> (learn) a lot of things. These days, we can use the internet everywhere. However, we used to get misinformation-> (we used to be misinformed). It would (have) confused thoughts of us-> our thoughts, so we need to distinguish (the difference) between useful information and wrong information.

[익인3]

자 뽀뽀해줘

[글쓴이]

오오오 고마워~~~~~