진짜 간단한 초등학생 수준 영어 틀린 부분 있는지 좀 봐줄사람 ㅠㅠㅠ 어색한 부분 좀 고쳐주세요💙

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My name is ㅇㅇ.

My family is father, mother and brother.

I really like my family.

Especially like my mother.  She is like a best friend.

My best friend is sㅇㅇ, eㅇㅇ and yㅇㅇ

sㅇㅇl and eㅇㅇ is my high school freiends.

And ㅇㅇ is my middle schoole friend.

I am happy because I am frireds with them.

I have no idea about my job, but I want to be a great people and make a lot of money.

So I want to help poor person.

My hobby is watching movie.

Recently, I often watching Japanese movie

Because I am studying Japanese

My favorite food is tofu.

Especially I like tofu in miso soup

I don’t know why I like tofu, but I liked tofu since my childhood.

My favorite animal is a cat.

Because I raised cat for 13 years.

I am studying Japanese and I like to travel.

So my goal in this year is to travel to Japan with my mom.

[글쓴이]

흑흑 ㅠㅠ 아무도 없는건구ㅜ

[익인1]

쓰고있어!! 잠깐만 ㅎㅎ

[글쓴이]

헉 ㅜㅜ 넘 고마워 사랑해

[익인2]

두번째문장 바꿔야하고
especially~여기에 주어가 업서 I 추가해야하고
great person
poor people
often watch

[글쓴이]

두번째 문장은 어떻게 바꿔야해> ㅠㅠ

[익인4]

문장 자체가 말이안돼 번역기 같오..
인터넷 치면 저 문장 써준거 많다 지식인같은데..

[글쓴이]

웅웅 고마워 !! ㅠㅠㅠ

[익인3]

My name is ㅇㅇ.

There are a father, mother, and elder/yonger brother in my family.

I really like my family. Especially I like my mother. She is like a best friend for me.

My best friend are sㅇㅇ, eㅇㅇ and yㅇㅇ

sㅇㅇl and eㅇㅇ are my high school freiends.

Andㅇㅇ is my middle schoole friend.

I am happy because I am friends with them.

I have no idea about my job, but I want to be a great person and make a lot of money.

So I want to help poor person.

My hobby is watching movie.

Recently, I watched Japanese movie because I am studying Japanese.

My favorite food is tofu.

Especially I like tofu in miso soup

I don’t know why I like tofu, but I have liked tofu since my childhood.

My favorite animal is a cat because I have raised cat for 13 years.

I am studying Japanese and I like to travel.

So my goal in this year is to travel to Japan with my mom.

[익인5]

아까 쓰고있다던 익인이야! ㅎㅎ 솔직히 말하면 내용이 엉망이어서,,,,,, 그냥 문법만 고쳤어,,

[글쓴이]

헐 진짜 고마워 ㅠㅠ 저거 내용은 그냥 두서없이 저렇게만 써오라고 하셔서 ㅠㅠ 훌쩍 ㅠㅠ
진짜 고마워 내가 영어를 진짜 토할정도로 싫어해서 이런 숙제 받고 어쩌나 고민 많이 했는데 익인이 덕분에
자신있게 제출해야겠다 고마워 ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ