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영작한 거는 이거!  

If i have a treasure box, i would like to keep books, my phone and diary in it. 

let me explain the reasons why i chose them. 

 

First, i like to read books. Reading books gives me a lot of thought and helps me. so l chose books. 

Second, i like web surfing and listening to music. i chose my phone because i can enjoy it with a phone. 

Lastly, i chose my diary. i finish the day and record it on my diary. i am proud to write and read it.  

 

Now that i selected three things to keep, i will keep the box hidden under my desk. if you find it, i will be glad to show my treasures to you.

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