외국어 영작 도와줄 익 없을까ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ???

제발... 틀린 문법이나 단어만 잡아주면 돼... 천사익들아 한 번만 도와줘ㅜㅜㅜㅜ 

 

Hello? I am 000. I chose the subject of life on the school And I will introduce club activities of mine. 

my club is '000' that the only literary club in the school. That much, We have various experiencing the literature. we gather at every Friday and Saturday, write a poem or novel. Than we publishes a irregular newsletter. And Once a year, literature as well go to camp. Ah, Club presentation in December, we have an exhibition of illustrated poems. And we are finally make a collection of works. 

I think my club is so cool. If you have time, I hope you could see that our newsletter, or an exhibition of illustrated poems. Also If you want to join us, then come to me in March next year. March, when the my club door is everyday With this, all my introduction is the end. So far thank for hear my tell.

[익인1]

Hello? I am 000. I chose the subject of life on the school And I will introduce club activities of mine.
my club is '000', which is the only literary club in the school. We do various activities related to literature. we gather at every Friday and Saturday, and write a poem or novel. Also, we publishe a irregular newsletter. Once a year, we go on a camp. In club presentation which is held in December, we exhibit illustrated poems. And we are finally make a collection of works.
I think my club is so cool. If you have time, I hope you could see our newsletter or illustrated poems. Also If you want to join us, please come to me in March next year. My club opens it's door in March. This is the end of my presentation. Thank you for listening.

[익인2]

근데 마지막에 'This is the end of ~. Thank you for listening.'은 안 하는 게 더 좋고 깔끔해... 그냥 Thank you. 하고 끝내는 게.

[글쓴이]

고마워ㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ 진짜 익인이 복 받을 거야 앞으로 일어난 후랑 잠자기 전에 익인이 잘 되라고 소원 빌고 잘게ㅜㅜ