영어 뭐 틀린거 없을까..? 작문인데 ㅠㅠ 도와주랑

To become amath teacher, I have to major in department of mathematics education in college.In order to enter the college, I’ve been doing my best to study and get goodgrades in school. In doing so, I’ve got too much stress and experienced aslump. However, I overcame it by listening to music. Music was my reliablehelper. Also, to make my dream come true, I need to have more experience. That’swhy I started to work as a volunteer in community child center. At first, itwas very difficult to understand my student’s thinking, but now I am learningproper method of understanding her and striving for finding the best method toget better grades. 〈o:p>〈/o:p>