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When the depression and lethargy comes to you,  

all you have to do is just close your eyes 

and keep thinking about your crowning people. 

 

This is your mom's breath, 

and this is your dad's heartbeat. 

These are your family's bliss. 

Remember it all the times. 

This is the reason that you must alive. 

 

 

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