외국어 영어 문법좀 봐줘ㅠㅠㅠ!! 제발ㅠㅠㅠ

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My trip to paju

My most memorable trip was visiting paju.

From my place, it tooks about two hours to get there. It was planned for 1 night, so 2 days.

I saw many things there, such as English village and provence

The best part of my trip was looking at the provence because the light festival of the provence was more beautiful than I had seen.

The trip to paju was more funny than I expected and it was so memorable because I went there with my friends.

 

 

문법이나 대문자 영어 같은거 틀린거 있나 좀 봐주라ㅠㅠㅠㅠ

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My trip to paju

My most memorable trip was visiting paju with my close friends.

From my place, it took about two hours to get there. It was planned for 1 night and 2 days.

I saw many things there, such as English village and provence.

The best part of my trip was looking the light festival of the provence because it was more beautiful than I had expected. It was the best light show I've ever seen.

The trip to paju was a lot funnier than I expected and it was much more memorable because I went there with my friends.

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쓰니꺼에서 문법이나 비문만 고쳤어! 내용은 거의 그대로야^^